User:CarsonSawatzke/Olsen–Chubbuck Bison Kill Site/CassieSmith5 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

CarsonSawatzke

Link to draft you're reviewing: I'm looking at the Wikipedia article on the Olsen Chubbuck Bison Kill Site, as I could not find any writing anywhere. If I missed where the writing was done, let me know and I will review that too!

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead

The lead focuses on the discovery of the kill site. I think it would be beneficial to also mention conclusion about consumption and butchery and estimated number of people to participate in the kill. The writing for the lead is sloppy, it could use some revisions. If you wanted to you could add coordinates to the top corner of the page, as I know so wikipedia articles do this.

Overall Thoughts

The overall structure of the article is strange. I think the sub sections on consumption, butchery and the stampede should be there own sections outside of the excavation section. Moreover, I don't like how the article is ordered. I think discovery should go after information about consumption and butchery and other stuff related to what actually happened at the kill site while it was a kill site. I also think the subsections of "Chubbuck and Olsen" and "Joe Ben Wheat..." could be combined with the section of "excavation."

This article could benefit from images. Maybe a map of where the kill site is. Maybe theres an image of the excavation site. Maybe theres an image of the sort of bison killed. Maybe theres an image of a projectile point excavated.

Directions for Future Work

Citations!!! Most of the citations are from a single 1967 article. The wikipedia article could greatly benefit from more recent citations. In particular building on the consumption and butchery sections would be interesting.