User:Carl pine
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Hi, My name is Carlos Pineda-Lopez. I am a junior at Marysville Getchell high school. I am currently enrolled in the running start program at Everett community college. One of my many hobbies is playing sports. The sports that I love to participate in football and diving. These two sports help me focus on school encouraging me to continue to keep my grades up at all times. Another one of my hobbies is doing interior designs on cars, like installing subwoofers and twitters. I currently live with my mom and dad and my three siblings. I have two twin brothers at the age of eight and one older brother at the age of nineteen.
Article Critique
[edit]I visited the Adalberto Rodríguez page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its lack of citations, the citations that are presented are not up to date and the article has irrelevant information.
Citations:
[edit]There are some citations on the page but not enough to the extent that is necessary to creating a successful article. The citations that are listed on the right side of the page that are included in a text box are not listed in the article itself, so this makes it hard to determine which citations are attributable to which sections. This article could use some external links to this page which will not only help the certainty of the article but will also help the article to be more up to date.
Age:
[edit]There are two different conflicts that contribute to the previous mentioned article being out of date. One of main reasons why the Adalberto Rodríguez is out of date is because if you take a look into the talk page of the article the last discussion that anyone had is on the date of December tenth of 2015. The second reason why the previously mentioned article is out of date is because if you click on some of the links, the links have been shut down or changed.
Structure/Completeness:
[edit]This article can be a very successful piece of information but only with a little help. There are two reasons how this article could be successful and one of the ways is to provide more information about this Puerto Rican comedian because if he was famous as stated then there must be more information on him. The second reason is by getting rid of some of the information provided. For example the statement "In his boyhood years he imitated animal sounds for his elementary school peers." This statement is irrelevant on the reasoning why he became a famous comedian.
Summary:
[edit]If I had to rate this article it would be "fixable." The information provided from this article does get the overall of view of the important aspects of the actor, but the article has out dated citations on the page which can be a problem when trying to find out the sources. Another reason why this article is fixable is by adding more citations within the article and less in a text box. The last way that this article could be fixed is adding and removing information in the article.