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Simplify the language especially in the section labelled "effects of white beauty standard"
Add to the section titled "About the author"
Add to the themes e.g. Violence/ discrimination / sexual abuse / animal abuse / incest
Find more cases for the "controversy" section to make the article more up to date. e.g. Find a case form 2017
Could find cases for why some believe that it should be read in schools and not banned etc..
List of scenes making it unsuitable for a classroom text?
The picture of the book could be made more up to date
Also may want to list how many pages a paper back book has because it only gives the number for a hardback book.
More precise citations are needed for this article as it has insufficient inline citations
Add last names to publishers
Add that the novel takes place in 1941
Edits:
Frieda MacTeer: Is Claudia's 10 year old sister. She is seen to defend both Claudia and Pecola within the novel. Frieda can be classified as determined, independent and stubborn at times.
Claudia MacTeer: The narrator of the majority of the novel. She is the child of Pecola's foster parents and is Frieda's sister. She can be seen to be an extremely independent and passionate 9 year old.