User:Beepboop327/Scuole Grandi of Venice/Carleighrosenberg Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

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• Beepboop327
• Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Beepboop327/Scuole Grandi of Venice ===

Lead

=== Guiding questions:

• No, the lead only has the one from the past article
• Yes
• It does have a list in the lead, but not a description
• No
• It is concise ===

Content

=== Guiding questions:

• Yes
• Yes
• Missing famous artists and art works associated with scuole, relationship between scuole and Venetian society and politics
• No ===

Tone and Balance

=== Guiding questions:

• Yes
• No
• No
• No ===

Sources and References

=== Guiding questions:

• Yes
• Yes, but there is definitely a lot more books that could be used and sources that we have read for class such as Howard, and Humfrey, and the Myth of Venice which all talked about scuole
• Yes
• Unsure
• The links for the sources work ===

Organization

=== Guiding questions:

• Yes, but it is all in bullet points right now
• No
• Yes, it is sectioned in an easy to navigate way ===

Images and Media

=== Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• No, it would be helpful to add pictures of the art and architecture associated with scuole
• N/A
• N/A
• N/A ===

For New Articles Only

=== If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

• N/A
• N/A
• N/A
• N/A ===

Overall impressions

=== Guiding questions:

• It gives more background on the history of scuole to place them in context of place and time, it also expands on the topic of music
• It gives more context and background to the subject
• Could have more specific examples and pictures of those examples, maybe talk about the architecture and the art inside of the scuole more, could talk about famous artists that are associated with scuole, the role of scuole in venetian society and politics. ===