User:Avahubacek
I am student at Lake Stevens high school, graduating 2019. I love being social with friends and family. My interests are listening to music, the outdoors, riding my horses and sleeping. I have 2 horses named Gracie and Duck, i compete with both of them around the county, I have been riding since I was 6 years old. If anything what represents me is my phone i love my phone for all purpose. I love taking photos and listening to music, also I'm very social so talking to people is a all time favorite for me when I open up to you.
I'm probably down to look at any Wikipedia articles, because I'm interested in everything. I love to learn about new things, I love looking into animal articles and I also love learning about new places around the world to travel. I love learning about different cultures and ethnicity. I'm also a food fanatic too so I love trying new food from around the world.
Article Critique
[edit]"I visited the bubble tea page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: the citations could be up to date , lack of information, and a lot of the articles reference are in foreign language."
The citations in article of Bubble tea page are not recently updated, Which needs corrected because It's important to cite sources you used in your research to show your reader you've done proper research by listing sources you used to get your information also to allow your reader to track down the sources you used by citing them accurately in your paper by way of footnotes, a bibliography or reference list, but it can also be stinker when sources are not update, which knowing the information is old and not renovated.
Secondly, the lack of information of Bubble tea in Wikipedia, is the probably the most important because just with anything. The more reliable information you have for bubble tea the more people can learn and understand, especially now bubble tea is very common in Washington, I'm sure people want to know what they are drinking.
Lastly, a lot of the articles reference are in foreign language, which it makes very hard. For American readers to click on the link and look into the articles when they are in different language. Which could interfere knowing if the sources are real or not. What they needs able to do is to translate the source articles language to English for Americans readers.
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