User:Alyssadebragga/Original Starbucks/St3ffsK Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Alyssadebragga

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Alyssadebragga/Original Starbucks
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Original Starbucks

Evaluate the drafted changes

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Alyssa! Here is my peer review:

Lead

A new lead has not been added to reflect new changes. As for right now, I would consider that it is in the first draft. There is an introductory sentence that is clear and concise. It is straight-forward and contains all the introductory information needed for a quick glance.

Content

Yes, the content added is relevant to the topic, it gave more impactful information on history and was specific. Adding a section would be great to give it more organization. I think sections like “History” or memorable events or achievements. The article does not deal with Wikipedia’s equity gaps.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral and mostly is about describing facts. There aren’t any bias claims to the topic. So far, the viewpoints seem very neutral. The added content doesn’t attempt to persuade a claim.

Sources and References

I don’t see any citations or added references. I would suggest adding citations and more reliable secondary sources to the references page. Also, adding a hyperlink to certain words like “whole bean coffee” or “tea” or “spices.” I cannot answer some of the questions since there are no new added sources.

Organization

Added content is clear and easy to read. There could be some grammatical improvements in the paragraphs. I think the sentence structure could flow better and the vocabulary could be clearer. More explanations on the coffee beans itself could also be interesting since that is what sets apart Starbucks from other coffee stores.

Images and Media

There aren’t new added images.

Overall impressions

I overall enjoyed reading your added content to this article! It does add more specific details to the history of how Starbucks was made. The strengths of this article is that there are details that are beneficial to the overall summary of the Original Starbucks.

It could be improved by adding more references and citations in the added content!