User:Aleah H.
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[edit]I have determined the audience for this article to most likely be ballet enthusiasts who are seeking a general overview of Zanella's work. This audience is unlikely to be overly familiar, but eager to learn more. The current state of this article exceeds these expectations as the authors clearly have extensive expertise concerning Zanella's choreography, but the amount of detail may overwhelm casual readers. My main goals for editing this article would be to: equally emphasize each section present, cut excessive detail, and either create subsections or insert charts to make the information present more readily accessible to readers. Major editors for this page that I may contact during this process would include User:Balubalu2011, the creator of the article, and User:This, that and the other. See my comments in the Talk Page for more in-depth information regarding potential changes.
I have determined that the audience for this article would most likely be potential customers and theme park enthusiasts who are, again, seeking a general overview of the park and its history. This audience may be familiar with this park's location and operation, but seeking to learn more about its past. The current state of the article reads much like an advertisement and is maintained by various IP addresses. My main goals for editing, much like above, will be to: cut excessive detail, enforce neutral point of view, and explore third party sources. See my comments in the Talk Page for more in-depth information regarding potential changes.