User:Ahixonsa
 | This user is a student editor in Vancouver_Island_University/HIST340:_Work_and_Workers_in_Canada_(Fall_2019). |
Comments on class assignment:
You picked an important part of Pritchard's life to add to the Wiki page, and the additional references have made it more credible. However, you also added some statements that need to be referenced. For example, the statement "The Winnipeg General Strike occurred in 1919 and was the most crucial strike in the history of Canada" needs a footnote. Also, it would be stronger to organize the section to highlight Pritchard's participation more fully. A good start!