User:AWFarrow/Greene and Greene/Emmitross Peer Review
General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing?
AWfarrow
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:AWFarrow/Greene_and_Greene?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
[edit]Lead
[edit]The lead is concise and provides a good overview of the article. I do not believe it was necessary to tweak the lead and it was left alone.
Content
[edit]The added content is very relevant to the article and provides important information about the inspirations of the Greene brothers. There is a small section about dougongs that is not relevant to the article.
Tone and Balance
[edit]The content added is fair and objective. It is simply factual and does not favor any particular position.
Sources and References
[edit]The sources are reliable and accurately reflected in the article content.
Organization
[edit]The content added is organized in a logical fashion and it is easy to read.
Images and Media
[edit]The student added a well captioned and relevant image that enhances the readers understanding of the article.
Overall Impressions
[edit]The content added definitely enhances the article and gives the reader a better understanding of the topic. The section on dougongs has some extraneous information not relevant to the Greene brothers. Other than that the additions are very nice.