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Requesting Help with an article

I was asked to review the article ''The Masks of Time'' and tell the author User:Captain-tucker what I thought. I thought that the article, parts of it anyways, was written from an in-universe perspective and said so. If you have the time, could you review the page, and tell me what you think?

Here's what I said I thought was wrong with the page:

My reasons for declaring this article {{In-universe}}

I know I'm not the most experienced or anything, but here goes:

The Plot summary is written from a perspective too much in universe. This will not be in accordance to WP:INUNIVERSE. An article for wikipedia should be from as realworld of a perspective as you can make it. (look who's calling the kettle black...)

Characters are Fine. I'd put in more details though. What were their roles in the book, not just their jobs. For an example see Artemis Fowl (series): Characters.

The theme of a book is the unifying subject or idea of a story that the author writes into the settings of the story. What you have there should go into a category labeled reception (or criticism), or something

Awards are fine.

External Links are fine. Add in references; for a good ref cite the book itself. Put quotations in their own sections with other miscellaneous information from the book or websites (like the reception or critisms)

Thank you for your help,

Cdmajava talk 02:11, 17 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

... re: rm

It is an engine, please do a little researching before you make assumptions. 98.226.32.129 (talk) 08:09, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Maintain a WP:CIVIL tone. The infobox calls for a singular overall engine, not the various componentized/specialized bits. Euphoria is integrated into LucasArts' Ronin; it doesn't warrant mention in the infobox. --EEMIV (talk) 11:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Starfleet Academy

1st off, the article does mention that ex astris scientia was the name of Bernd Schnieder's website, which is a prominent star trek resource. That, as I understand it, has been there a while, without being considered promotion. Wouldn't a link to the said site, combined with its tie in to the article, be appropriate?

Clone trooper

In response to this

I dont understandwhy you undid my edit,there is a lot more stuff that this article needs and I will continue to edit this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Halo 31887 (talk • contribs)

The material you added was uncited trivia. As uncited or as trivia, it doesn't belong at Wikipedia; being both, it deserved a quick deletion. --EEMIV (talk) 15:17, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This is not trivia, this is show in the movies Star Wars Episode III: Revenge of the Sith were there is a clear distinction between them by color on their amror which clearley is shows thier rank.s. User:Halo 31887 15:49, 21 September 2008

Yeah, that's WP:TRIVIA. Take a gander at WP:NOT#INFO, WP:PLOT, WP:WAF for starters. --EEMIV (talk) 21:54, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I can give you a source, read this: "Clone troopers were fully encased in hard white armor, their identical faces concealed behind a t-shaped visor. In the first units, color-coded flashes on the armor denoted rank, with green troopers being sergeants, blue being lieutenants, red being captains, and yellow being commanders. The clones designated for command duty were specifically trained in that capacity." - http://www.starwars.com/databank/organization/clonetroopers/index.html Star Wars.com Databank]

or see

Star Wars Episode III: Revenge of the Sith, Labyrinth of Evil novel, Guide to the Grand Army of the Republic, Complete Visually dictionary. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Halo 31887 (talk • contribs)

Please don't post on my talk page again until you actually read and understand the policies and guidelines linked above. I am challenging the notability and non-trivial nature of the material you want to add -- not its verifiability. There are lots of verifiable facts out there -- the color of President Bush's favorite shoes, whether Luke Skywalker parts his hair to the left or right, how many bricks are in the building outside my window -- but they aren't notable enough for inclusion at Wikipedia. --EEMIV (talk) 22:20, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I will carefully read over this, and get back to you User:Halo 31887 22:26, 21 September 2008

Ok,What can I do to improve this article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Halo 31887 (talk • contribs)

Find, add, and cite information that examines clone troopers from a real-world perspective. Was the costuming inspired by real-world armor? Did the artists attempt to change the clone trooper armor's appearance in Attack of the Clones and Revenge of the Sith to appear to "lead in" to the stormtrooper armor of the original trilogy? What sort of motion capture did ILM use to help animate the characters? How well did the clone trooper action figures sell compared to other toys marketed for the films' release? How did the clones' role change across the movies' various drafts -- did clone troopers appear in the 1970s Star Wars scripts, or were they created only when Lucas sat down specifically to write the prequels? etc. Take a look at the articles on Jabba the Hutt and Padme Amidala for examples of well-done Star Wars character articles. --EEMIV (talk) 22:48, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Wire Interview with David Simon Re: Bill Rawls

Hello,

Regarding your latest edit on William Rawls, I'm not sure why you're calling an interview with David Simon an unreliable source. Do you think the guy behind that website made up that interview or something? That site has some shortcomings, but I don't see what's wrong with referencing the interview with Simon. Thanks! --Omarcheeseboro (talk) 22:13, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It is posted to an AOL member page, which does not meet the requirements of WP:RS. If the AOL page is a transcript of an interview done elsewhere with an actual publication, TV show, etc. then cite that source. I don't object to the information -- I think it's worth including -- but I object to the sourcing. And in the absence of a citation substantiating the claim that the scene has "led to speculation," it shouldn't be there; the plot summary description of the scene in the interim will have to suffice. --EEMIV (talk) 22:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Question

Hi, earlier today I edited the article In a Mirror, Darkly and you deleted my edit. I am new to editing Wikipedia and I don't know why. Please enlighten me. -Techno.Matthew —Preceding unsigned comment added by Techno.matthew (talk • contribs) 02:00, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Links to YouTube are generally frowned upon, and the content itself was trivial. --EEMIV (talk) 02:02, 22 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sith

Somewhat over-zealous editing of the reference to Force Unleashed in the Sith article. The general addition was relevant. If you thought I had drifted into Original Research, then you could have just trimmed it, instead of a blanket delete and a tick-off message. It's this jumped-up, power-crazed administration that makes Wikipedia editing so hard to get into. Chill out. 193.194.132.78 (talk) 15:27, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not an admin. Rather than posting this unnecessary message on my talk page, your time would have been better spent finding and citing a reliable source for your otherwise original research about the Sith in The Force Unleashed. --EEMIV (talk) 15:37, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Statements which are doubtful but not harmful should be tagged with 'cite' tags. Only claims which are harmful, or those which have unresolved 'cite' tags should be deleted (paraphrased from the policy links that you so kindly provided me). I accept that posting this message is unnecessary, my time is ill-spent, and I have not digested enough of the vast Wikipedia bureaucracy machine in order to add anything worthwhile to it. In return, I respectfully suggest you tone down your editing style and cut fledgling editors some slack - as, according to the policy articles you quote, your edits are deemed over-zealous. 193.194.132.78 (talk) 16:00, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

List of people who died before the age of 30

It appears obvious now that the page List of people who died before the age of 30 is headed to deletion. I support its deletion myself. But this has given me an idea. Do you think it would make sense to have a set of categories called "Age x deaths," all in a parent category called "Deaths by age?" That seems like a better idea. This way, there would be no worry where to draw the line as to what age is "significant" as an age of death, and all ages people live to can possibly be included. There would be no need for one person to create all these categories in one day - they could be built gradually over time. We already have categories like 1949 deaths. Why can't we do the same with age? I would like some input. Sebwite (talk) 22:43, 23 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

People ganging up to disrupt an article

Hi,

I found you at Wikipedia:Editor assistance. If you can spare a few minutes of your time helping out at Indo-Aryan loanwords in Tamil, I would be thankful.

I am developing an article on words borrowed by Tamil from Indo-Aryan languages. I am citing a standard authoritative lexicon from which I find the words that are borrowed before including them at Indo-Aryan loanwords in Tamil. There are a few people who seem to be intent in damaging the article by adding "cite" tags, "disputed" and "dubious" tags for the article and threatening to delete it within 24 hours.

Could you please help?

Thanks. Kris (talk) 18:53, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Article HK-47

Regarding the citation needed for the sentence:

"In a more out-of-the-way war of the Star Wars universe, HK-47's original design, HK-01, caused the Great Droid Revolution that consequently led to the increased design of ion and other anti-droid weaponry."

do you think we should just removed this sentence entirely for the sake of credibility, seeing as how it is more a tidbit of trivia than need to know information about the actual character? The article will look more credible without the 'needs citations' notice at the top, plus this was the only citation that was requested.

I did search for a more reliable source however was not able to find one, I doubt one exists.

Thanks for your help.

--Freikorp (talk) 08:35, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Imperial Armour

I have removed the {{prod}} tag from Imperial Armour, which you proposed for deletion, because I think that the deletion of this article may be controversial. I'm leaving this message here to notify you about it. If you still think the article should be deleted, please don't add the {{prod}} template back to the article. Instead, feel free to list it at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion. Thanks! JGHowes ^talk 02:04, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

star trek doctor

Please do not edit this article until you have read WP:WAF and taken a look at the policies linked above. Thanks! --EEMIV (talk) 02:03, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

im reviewing those pages, fairly new to this, just adding info as i met some of the cast at the experience in vegas; just fyi these wiki notices appear on the previous version of the doctor" "This Star Trek-related article or section describes an aspect of Star Trek in a primarily in-universe style. Please rewrite this article or section to explain the fiction more clearly and provide non-fictional perspective.

The plot summary in this article or section is too long or detailed compared to the rest of the article.

Please edit the article to focus on discussing the work rather than merely reiterating the plot. (November 2007)

This section may contain original research or unverified claims. Please improve the article by adding references. See the talk page for details. (July 2008)"

it is quite wordy and more of doctor episode synopsis, rather than the character, and real world non fictional perspective

cheers!

66.229.212.172 (talk) 02:27, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Naomi Wildman

I'm not going to go reverting anything...but the Naomi Wildman article was had sources and cites, I should know, I added them. Lots42 (talk) 16:11, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Are you kidding? The article was entirely plot summary, save for a single sentence about different actors. There wasn't even a "References" section, with no citations -- or even references in the text -- to even one third-party sources to establish notability. --EEMIV (talk) 16:14, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Image:Revan.jpg

Actually, I do prefer this one to the one currently in the infobox, but perhaps I was a bit hasty there, apologies. I stand by my reversions of your unilateral redirects, though; you personally may feel that these articles do not meet guidelines, but here at Wikipedia we work on consensus and discussion, and it is considered courteous to leave a note on the page and to initiate a discussion on the talk page of the article, as well as the talk page of the relevant WikiProject if the page is not widely watched (as seems to be your usual target). I will revert my addition of the superfluous Revan image to the article. GlassCobra 13:33, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You don't need to offer the snide "here at Wikipedia". If you can offer third-party sources to substantiate or justify your restoration of obviously in-universe plot summary crap, that's great -- but, you didn't. And as I posted on your talk page -- and where I would have preferred you post your response, per the big freakin' banner at the top of this page; thanks for noticing -- the responsibility for meeting requirements of WP:GNG and WP:RS are on the person adding/restoring material, and you didn't even make a stab at meeting those. And if you're big on the talk-page component and making a case for these articles' retention, why didn't you post something beyond the edit summary? If your criterion for inclusion at Wikipedia is "preservation of information", you really do need to take a break and look at the policies we use "here at Wikipedia". --EEMIV (talk) 13:40, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I wasn't intending to be snide, though I can't say the same about your recent comments. Apologies for not noticing your banner, I'm used to leaving messages on others' pages and don't really like responding on my own page. My reasons for restoring your redirects are simply to preserve the pages themselves -- if they're redirects, anyone not familiar with MediaWiki will not know how to add additional material or sources. If the AfDs decide that the pages should be merged, that'll have to do. On the case of Darth Malak, though, I do strongly disagree with your characterization -- like Revan, Malak appears in several other Star Wars media besides the game, comics, action figures, etc. He in particular deserves a standalone much more so than the other NPCs. GlassCobra 14:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

so your a hypocrite

you undue my chabnges, but then suddenly you say it shouldnt be going to that article, im sorry but your the one who put it there to.--Jakezing (talk) 11:07, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

What are you talking about? The only article we've had overlapping edits on in the last month is the talk-page for The Force Unleashed, where you posted some random comment not even about the article at all that another editor removed. --EEMIV (talk) 11:33, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Notice

Lumpawarrump

In response to this

I undid your revision on this article. Blanking a page and adding a redirect without prior consultation with fellow Wikipedians is not the way to do this kind of things. If you think this article should be deleted (or merged), start an AfD about it. Please note that I do think you made some valids points when you asked for deletion, but doing things all by yourself is IMHO wrong. Regards Ksempac (talk) 13:22, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

In lieu of a barnstar

So you're not into Barnstars and Wikilove all that much, it appears, judging from your userpage. I'd like to present you with some possibly worthy addition to your LOL diffs section and I may yet do so when I come across something extraordinary. Anyway, having watchlisted many SW character list articles from when I tagged them, I've been noticing your efforts to clean up those Star Wars character articles. Needless to say, you're one absolutely great editor and that compliment goes beyond my mere agreement with your edits. Please keep it up. Everyme 05:23, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'd forgotten about the "LOL diffs" -- it was a stress-valve for me to keep track of the more outlandish things a former editor wrote. But it's gone now. As for barnstars, I just don't flash them around. Regardless, though, thanks for notice! --EEMIV (talk) 13:41, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Gosh, had I known the minor SW character section was going to be mashed into one big article, I wouldn't have spent virtually my entire Sunday working on it and cleaning it up. Oh well. sixtynine ^{• speak, I say •} 07:12, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There's still plenty of work to do. Tedious things like fixing double redirects, for one (although I think these are such unlikely search and click-through items that I'm not sweating it all that much -- at least until I can figure out how to get AWB to help me). There are also a bunch of stand-alone character articles that should be merged/blurbed and redirected into that list. --EEMIV (talk) 13:41, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

thanks

okay. I understand. I just wanted to make a joke. sorry. come to my talk if you want to rant about something random. by the way, do you play jedi academy? MidKnightHunter (talk) 19:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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 ==thanks==
-okay. I understand. I just wanted to make a joke. sorry. come to my talk if you want to rant about something random.
+okay. I understand. I just wanted to make a joke. sorry. come to my talk if you want to rant about something random. by the way, do you play jedi academy?
 [[User:MidKnightHunter|MidKnightHunter]] ([[User talk:MidKnightHunter|talk]]) 19:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)