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Thanks for the acceptance! No QPQ needed: this is my first DYK nom., though I have since done one review.
Agree, ALT1 is definitely better. Also agree about the two paragraphs being awkward (in section Breeding); I was struggling with how to express the statements in different sources and still maintain tight referencing. HBW Alive says "habit of nesting in tree holes made by other birds", but it's not clear whether that statement is based only on the single observation of Kemp and Vidhidharm that is described in GRIN.