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GalliumBot (talkcontribs) (he/it) 16:25, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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@AirshipJungleman29 Thanks for promoting! I see that you shortened the hook. Do you think we still need to include the word "eventually" in the text? Edge3 (talk) 22:58, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@AirshipJungleman29 So sorry to bother you again, but I have another request. Should we mention in the hook that they are "misconduct allegations", rather than just mere "allegations"? Alternatively, you could use the wording "allegations of misconduct by police officers". Edge3 (talk) 16:14, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think that's necessary, Edge3. I can't think of many allegations you could make against police officers that doesn't fall under "misconduct", used in a general sense like here. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:17, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Makes sense! Thanks for the input. Edge3 (talk) 16:35, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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GalliumBot (talkcontribs) (he/it) 13:26, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]