Template:Did you know nominations/Zenbook

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:52, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Zenbook

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... that the 13 inch Zenbook Prime (11 inch pictured) has the highest screen resolution and contrast ratio of any ultrabook?

Reviewed: Royoporus badius
Comment: The references and hook appear in this section of the article, specifically [1][2]

ALT1... that the 11 inch Zenbook Prime (pictured) ultrabook has a 1920 × 1080 screen?
ALT2... that the concentric circles on the lid of a Zenbook (pictured) are designed to look like ripples in water?

Created/expanded by James086 (talk). Self nom at 13:55, 24 October 2012 (UTC)

While things may check out on this, and a quick review shows that they do, I'm concerned that it comes to close to being an advert. Technically it meets the rules of DYK and is a well-referenced article but the supplementary rules do mention WP:ADVERTISING which I think might need to be called into practice here. violet/riga _^[talk] 10:18, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Could you provide an example so I can rewrite it from a more neutral tone? I'm guessing this relates mostly to the Design section but I'm not sure. James086^Talk 10:50, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I wasn't clear enough - I mean more directly relating to this hook. The article seems to meet the guidelines. violet/riga _^[talk] 11:05, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, I added another possible hook. The screen is an unusual feature of these laptops. James086^Talk 13:46, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. Perhaps a hook describing the concentric circle design might be better - promoting the screen res might still come across a little bit too much like an advert. violet/riga _^[talk] 20:24, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

Ready to go with ALT2. Thanks. violet/riga _^[talk] 19:40, 14 November 2012 (UTC)