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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:52, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Zenbook

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An Asus Zenbook Prime

Created/expanded by James086 (talk). Self nom at 13:55, 24 October 2012 (UTC)

  • While things may check out on this, and a quick review shows that they do, I'm concerned that it comes to close to being an advert. Technically it meets the rules of DYK and is a well-referenced article but the supplementary rules do mention WP:ADVERTISING which I think might need to be called into practice here. violet/riga [talk] 10:18, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
Could you provide an example so I can rewrite it from a more neutral tone? I'm guessing this relates mostly to the Design section but I'm not sure. James086Talk 10:50, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, I wasn't clear enough - I mean more directly relating to this hook. The article seems to meet the guidelines. violet/riga [talk] 11:05, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, I added another possible hook. The screen is an unusual feature of these laptops. James086Talk 13:46, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
Thanks. Perhaps a hook describing the concentric circle design might be better - promoting the screen res might still come across a little bit too much like an advert. violet/riga [talk] 20:24, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Ready to go with ALT2. Thanks. violet/riga [talk] 19:40, 14 November 2012 (UTC)