The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 14:36, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
5x expanded by Gwillhickers (talk). Self-nominated at 22:49, 30 March 2021 (UTC).
I was in the middle of reviewing this nomination and then lost my internet connection. I'm just making my place right now so nobody else has to duplicate my efforts. I'll post my review once my internet connection comes back. Hopefully later today.Dugan Murphy (talk) 21:54, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Overall: @Gwillhickers: I recommend removing the phrase "after he died" from the hook. I believe that would make it easier to read and more compelling. But I'd say this nomination is good to go whether or not my recommendation is accepted. Dugan Murphy (talk) 17:32, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
Gwillhickers, I'm wondering if a moderate revision of your hook to read:
... that after he died, American Revolutionary War General and physician William Irvine was buried three different times at three different locations?
would be okay with you? I think that might help it to read a bit more clearly. MeegsC (talk) 21:25, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
@Gwillhickers: I recommend removing the phrase "after he died" from the hook. I believe that would make it easier to read and more compelling. But I'd say this nomination is good to go whether or not my recommendation is accepted. Dugan Murphy (talk) 17:32, 6 April 2021 (UTC)