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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 09:40, 15 June 2022 (UTC)

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Victoria Desintonio

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Victoria Desintonio
Victoria Desintonio

Created by Victuallers (talk). Self-nominated at 09:23, 28 May 2022 (UTC).

  • I can share some feed back– is there any info / scope to expand on what does a 'citizen observatory' constitute and operates like? – but I am unable to provide review since google translator seem not helping in this case, seems some other reviewer knowing the Spanish language will need to help out on review.
Bookku, 'Encyclopedias = expanding information & knowledge' (talk) 04:24, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
  • New enough and long enough. QPQ present. The Asamblea Nacional profile does indeed mention this; I note it is also written by her (or at least in first person): En el CPCCS, propuse un Observatorio Ciudadano, para la aplicación, implementación y cumplimiento efectiva de la Ley para la prevención y erradicación de la violencia de género y fue aprobado a las pocas semanas de mi posesión, una de mis propuestas cumplidas. (That said, at least one secondary source attributes this to her.) In Spanish, when I see observatorio, especially in a civil society context, I'd call it a "watchdog", and I'd be comfortable with a mention of this in the page, Victuallers. (Think Syrian Observatory for Human Rights, one of the few English-language examples of this sort of usage.) The article looks fine, though I do think the CPCCS should be namechecked at least once despite its unwieldy full name. I suggest a possible ALT0a if the article is modified accordingly: Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • ALT0a ... that Victoria Desintonio successfully proposed a "citizen observatory" watchdog to reduce gender violence in Ecuador?
@Sammi Brie: Thanks for the suggestions Sammi and the review. I'm quite happy with your improved hook and I have added the very helpful new ref. Victuallers (talk) 08:21, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • This is approved. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:21, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
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