Template:Did you know nominations/Tim Robards

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 03:43, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

Tim Robards

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• ... that chiropractor Tim Robards was the first Australian Bachelor? Source: "Sydney based chiropractor Tim Robards, 30, has been named as the object of desire in TEN's reality series The Bachelor."
  • ALT1:... that chiropractor Tim Robards and lawyer Anna Heinrich were the first couple from The Bachelor Australia to marry? Source: "Robards and Heinrich, who met five years ago on the first season of the Channel 10 show, are the first couple from the Australian reality TV franchise to marry."
  • ALT2:... that former Australian Bachelor Tim Robards made his acting debut as Pierce Greyson in Neighbours? Source: "Tim has been part of the Network Ten family since 2013 when he became Australia's first Bachelor. We are thrilled to now welcome him to the Neighbours family in his first acting appearance. We cannot wait to watch his character, Pierce Greyson, flourish in air in the coming months."

• Reviewed: I.O.U. Haifan Lin
• Comment: Please feel free to tweak the hook, or suggest another.

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:57, 20 October 2018 (UTC).

The article is long enough and new enough. The article appears well written with no obvious copyright violations, and the sources appear legitimate. The hooks are good, though the flow of the second hook might be improved by changing the word "became" to "were" due to the slight difference in implied importance of timing of the event. --User:SonOfPatter (talk)

• Added QPQ, changed wording in the ALT1 hook per review. - JuneGloom07 Talk 00:10, 23 October 2018 (UTC)