Template:Did you know nominations/The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey
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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 19:29, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
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The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey
- ... that historian Alec Ryrie said that The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey convinced him that "there is such a thing as 'Anglicanism' after all"? Source: Ryrie, Alec (2010). "The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey". Reformation. 15: 223-224.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Glitch Productions
- Comment:
QPQ to come
Created by Pbritti (talk). Self-nominated at 19:35, 23 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- I will review this article in the coming week! WatkynBassett (talk) 15:19, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- The article was created on 22 November 2023 and nominated on 23 November 2023 and is thus eligible.
- The article has over 1,500 characters of readable prose.
- The article is adequately sourced. I did a spot check, and the content was covered by the source.
- The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
- Earwig did not pick up anything suspicions.
- QPQ provided.
- Hook review: The hook is interesting; it has the right length, and it is quoted inline. I see only one issue: The partly quoted sentence reads like this in full: "What it does achieve—and this is not insignificant—is to use the Book(s) of Common Prayer to tell Anglicanism’s story in a reasonably coherent way: so much so that it almost makes me suspect, against my better judgement, that there is such a thing as 'Anglicanism' after all." Saying that Alec Ryrie is convinced of Anglicanism after his reading of the book thus seems to go too far. So, I would suggest that one uses a slightly rewritten hook a bit closer to the actual wording (e.g. ... that it made Ryrie "suspect [...] that there is such a thing".
- Result: Thank you, Pbritti, for creating such quality work. I will gladly tick this nomination if my slight quibble with the formulation of the hook is dealt with. WatkynBassett (talk) 19:45, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- @WatkynBassett: Below is an ALT1 based on your helpful and thorough review. Thank you! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that historian Alec Ryrie said that The Oxford Guide to the Book of Common Prayer: A Worldwide Survey made him suspect that "there is such a thing as 'Anglicanism' after all"?
- Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Perfect, @Pbritti:! I approve ALT1. WatkynBassett (talk) 06:29, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- @WatkynBassett: Below is an ALT1 based on your helpful and thorough review. Thank you! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Result: Thank you, Pbritti, for creating such quality work. I will gladly tick this nomination if my slight quibble with the formulation of the hook is dealt with. WatkynBassett (talk) 19:45, 26 November 2023 (UTC)