Template:Did you know nominations/Susanne Rosenberg

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 18:59, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

Susanne Rosenberg

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• ... that composer Karin Rehnqvist and singers Susanne Rosenberg and Lena Willemark collaborated to include Swedish folk elements such as kulning (cattle calling) to classical music?

• Reviewed: Axel Jansson (1916)
• Comment: 8 March or later

Created by Hafspajen (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 13:24, 25 February 2014 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. However, I don't see the hook fact in the article. It says that the composer and singers collaborated, and it says that Susanne Rosenberg does kulning, but it doesn't put the two together the way the hook does. Yoninah (talk) 00:09, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

• Let me think about it, we have a few more days until 8 March. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
• I added more details and two more sources, supporting the hook (I think), and something more precise:
• ALT1: ... that Karin Rehnqvist composed Puksånger & lockrop for singers Susanne Rosenberg and Lena Willemark, in which kulning "begins the piece and sets the atmosphere for the entire work"?
• ALT2: ... that Karin Rehnqvist composed Puksånger & lockrop for singers Susanne Rosenberg and Lena Willemark, in which a kulning section represents a rebellion?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:48, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

• Thank you, the ALTs are good and verified. I'd just like to know if we could include the definition "(cattle calling)" after the word kulning? Yoninah (talk) 18:54, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

• We could, but I was afraid to get too long.

ALT3: ... that Karin Rehnqvist composed Puksånger & lockrop for singers Susanne Rosenberg and Lena Willemark, in which kulning (cattle calling) "begins the piece and sets the atmosphere for the entire work"?

• ALT4: ... that Karin Rehnqvist composed Puksånger & lockrop for singers Susanne Rosenberg and Lena Willemark, in which a section of kulning (cattle calling) "represents a rebellion"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:14, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

• The length is fine; I prefer ALT4, but I'll leave the choice to the closing administrator. Hook ref verified and cited inline for both ALT3 and ALT4. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 19:22, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

• Moving to holding area for March 8. Yoninah (talk) 19:22, 1 March 2014 (UTC)