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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 16:30, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

Super Robot Wars UX

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Created/expanded by Odie5533 (talk), Blackgaia02 (talk). Nominated by Odie5533 (talk) at 17:31, 17 December 2012 (UTC)

Easy verification: The hook can be verified from the following line in the Development section: "The game's producer, Ayumi Uta, noted that the game will include playable robots from 16 media franchise titles, eight of which will be appearing for the first time in a Super Robot Wars game."
  • Taken review...making first comment shortly.
Article is long enough, well ref'd, hook ref'd, new enough (nom'd withing 4 days of creation), QPQ done
Some issues: is it possible to wikilink the 2 black texts in the list? Also perhaps use a table for them?
More importantly, copyvio concerns: "The game's producer, Ayumi Uta, noted that the game will include playable robots from 16 media franchise titles, eight of which will be appearing for the first time..." vs. the source: "... Ayumi Uta, the producer of the new Super Robot Wars UX game at B.B. Studio, it will have playable robots from 16 titles, including eight that debuting in the franchise..." Is that an acceptable reword?Lihaas (talk) 14:17, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Yes. It needs serious rewording.--Blackgaia02 (Talk if you're Worthy) (talk) 14:27, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
The links are black because I believe they are duplicated by the entries immediately preceding them. I'm not sure a table would be appropriate because no real comparison is made between titles. I meant to have attributed the sentence to the source rather than Uta. I recast the sentence: "Robots from eight new media franchise titles will be making their first appearances in a Super Robot Wars game, and a total of 16 titles are being used to supply the game with robots." --Odie5533 (talk) 16:34, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Overlinking is exempted from tables/lists, its only OL for prose. Guess were ready to approve this one with that correcion?Lihaas (talk) 19:09, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Done. --Odie5533 (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
Lihaas (talk) 00:07, 4 January 2013 (UTC)