Template:Did you know nominations/Stephen III of Hungary

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:48, 29 October 2014 (UTC)

Stephen III of Hungary

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... that Stephen III of Hungary had his throne usurped twice, fought a war with the Byzantine Empire, and died at only age 25?

Improved to Good Article status by Borsoka (talk), Vantine84 (talk), 94.21.194.167 (talk). Nominated by 3family6 (talk) at 19:15, 27 October 2014 (UTC).

Well-written (although the prose could use a bit more polishing), well-referenced, quite comprehensive and interesting. Facts are referenced (AGF on the mostly offline sources, although I don't think that is a problem), QPQ not needed. I've made some minor typo and prose tweaks, and tagged for a date reference, but this is about it, the article is good to go. Well done to the authors. However, I'd like to suggest a variant hook, that is IMO more complete: ALT1 "... that in a reign of ten years, Stephen III of Hungary had his throne usurped twice, fought a series of wars with the Byzantine Empire, and died at the age of 25?" Constantine ✍ 23:32, 28 October 2014 (UTC)

I'm fine with that alternate hook, but I think it needs approval from another editor.--¿3family6 _contribs 03:39, 29 October 2014 (UTC)

Hooks suggested by reviewers typically only need a re-approval if they change significantly from the original or introduce new hooks. This should be okay. 97198 (talk) 11:48, 29 October 2014 (UTC)