Template:Did you know nominations/Stan's World Cup Song
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:32, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
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Stan's World Cup Song
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... that in "Stan's World Cup Song", "the Germans bombed our chippy"?
- ALT1:... that England players allegedly sang "Aye Aye Ippy The Germans Bombed Our Chippy" despite the FA not wanting to support any anti-German songs?
- Reviewed: Steaming process in Lancashire cotton mills
- Comment: For the World Cup, Maybe on 14 June for England's first match
Created by The C of E (talk). Self nominated at 09:08, 12 May 2014 (UTC).
- Long enough, new enough, looks good to me except I think more context as to what the song is about, who Stan Boardman is, and (perhaps most importantly) what a chippy is should be added before this goes to DYK. Jinkinson talk to me 01:44, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
- I was aiming to be hooky by leaving out those details, if people was to know they can always click to find out. I have linked chippy to fish and chip shop. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:34, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
- Ok, I guess that makes sense. Looks
ready to me now. Jinkinson talk to me 12:09, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Besides "long enough, new enough, looks good to me", this review needs more details, in accordance with DYK review instructions. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at DYK Reviewing guide. I'm returning this to the main queue until a full DYK review is done. Yoninah (talk) 22:42, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
- Ok, I guess that makes sense. Looks
- I was aiming to be hooky by leaving out those details, if people was to know they can always click to find out. I have linked chippy to fish and chip shop. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:34, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
- Long enough, new enough, looks good to me except I think more context as to what the song is about, who Stan Boardman is, and (perhaps most importantly) what a chippy is should be added before this goes to DYK. Jinkinson talk to me 01:44, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Right then. So in addition to being new and long enough, as mentioned above, the third criterion is that it must be within policy, which means it should be:
- free of copyvios, which it apparently is.
- cited with inline citations, which, again, is clearly the case for this article.
- neutral, which this article is because it includes both positive (i.e. by the football players) and negative reception of the song.
- The hook must be:
- interesting, which, as per nom's attempt to be vague/"hooky" to lure people into clicking on it, this article is.
- The hook must also be cited in the article, which it is (in the first reference). Jinkinson talk to me 01:19, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
Thank you. Which hook are you approving? If ALT1, there needs to be a cite right after that sentence. Yoninah (talk) 09:30, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
- I have added that source after the hook for alt1. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 10:30, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
- I reviewed the sources and did not find close paraphrasing. However, the ALT1 hook source does not say that the Football Association was against the song because it was "pro-war", but because it was "anti-German". Also, FA should be spelled out or at least linked in the hook so it's clear who you're talking about (not being a sports fan, I read it "FAA"). Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:27, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
