Template:Did you know nominations/Soviet guard ship Groza

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 01:45, 2 June 2023 (UTC)

Soviet guard ship Groza

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... that anti-aircraft defense for the Soviet guard ship Groza was supposed to be done by four single 37-millimeter 11-K AA guns, but bad relations with the UK left them using a pair of PM M1910 instead? Source: Hill, Alexander (2018). Soviet Destroyers of World War II. New Vanguard. Vol. 256. Oxford: Osprey Publishing. ISBN 978-1-4728-2256-7. Page 21
- ALT1: ... that Soviet guard ship Groza was active in providing fire support for Soviet troops along with helping to land two battalions of infantry to counter-attack the Germans in Operation Platinum Fox? Source: Citations 18 and 19
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fuccboi (novel)
- Comment: I hate the 200 character limit and outrageously long military weapon names. If anyone can find ways to shorten these hooks then i'd appreciate it.

Improved to Good Article status by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 02:37, 5 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Soviet guard ship Groza; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Reviewing. jengod (talk) 20:03, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: jengod (talk) 02:44, 1 June 2023 (UTC)

Basically all good. onegreatjoke and Sturmvogel 66 please take a look at these possible hook edits and let me know if they've introduced any errors. After they're checked we're go for launch.

ALT-orig-b ... that anti-aircraft defense for the Soviet guard ship Groza was supposed to be four single 37-mm 11-K guns, but bad relations with the UK left them with two PM M1910 instead?
ALT1-b ... that the Soviet guard ship Groza provided fire support and landed two infantry battalions to counterattack the Germans during Operation Platinum Fox?

Thank you for contributing this good work to Wikipedia. jengod (talk) 20:52, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

@Jengod: Those are much better. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:40, 1 June 2023 (UTC)

Okey-doke! Should be ticked and ready to go. Cheers. jengod (talk) 02:44, 1 June 2023 (UTC)