Template:Did you know nominations/San Nicasio

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:43, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

San Nicasio

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... that the Andalucian based San Nicasio company produces gourmet potato chips made with Himalayan pink salt and extra virgin olive oil?

Reviewed: Hayley Chapman

Created/expanded by Nikthestoned (talk). Self nom at 14:16, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Article presently has 980 B of prose, less than the 1500 minimum (list of awards doesn't count toward it). Chris857 (talk) 15:59, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Length of article increased to comply with guideline, please reassess. Nik thestoned 09:41, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

Review

Article at 1556B prose and is new
Cited inline
Seems sufficiently neutral
Most content verified
I find no copyvio
Hook is brief enough
No hook image
QPQ performed

Issues:

Ref for the package sizes? Maybe the product page?
I don't see any reference provided mentioning that the potatoes are "selected", mostly finest. Maybe just drop the adjective.
ZiiBest is a blog. What makes it reliable? Does another reference mention that they are slow cooked?
Reality Sense isn't really explicit about the Monde Selection awards for 08, 09, and 10. InfoRestauracion, even though in Spanish, may be a better choice.
If you can, pare down the four refs for the ingredients. That many shouldn't be necessary.

Chris857 (talk) 02:10, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the comprehensive review . Changes made as per above. Nik thestoned 08:27, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

One last thing. The hook doesn't seem very exciting or "hooky" to me; I think something dealing with its high cost may be more interesting. Once the hook is resolved, this will pass. Chris857 (talk) 17:45, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the Andalucian based San Nicasio company caused controversy in the UK due to their £4 ($6.24) gourmet potato chips?
ALT2 ... that the Andalucian based San Nicasio company caused controversy in the UK due to their £4 ($6.24) potato chips, almost twice the average market price?

No idea how to use currency on the front page so feel free to amend! Nik thestoned 08:35, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

I have added links to the currencies as I've seen done before. This now passes for ALTs 1 and 2, both are verified and brief enough, no refs AGF. Chris857 (talk) 16:21, 19 July 2012 (UTC)