Template:Did you know nominations/SS Lakeland
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
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SS Lakeland
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[[File:|120x133px|The SS Lakeland sinking ]]
The SS Lakeland sinking
... that the SS Lakeland is a shipwreck on Lake Michigan?Lakeland Shipwreck (Steam Screw)
- ALT1:... that the SS Lakeland was the first Lake freighter to be equipped with a triple expansion steam engine? Lakeland Shipwreck (Steam Screw)
- ALT2:... that the SS Lakeland was only the second Globe Iron Works (GIW) built freighter to be built out of steel plates? Lakeland Shipwreck (Steam Screw)
- ALT3:... that while the lake freighter Lakeland was sinking, her Captain, Captain John McNeely refused a tow from the ferry Ann Arbor No.6? Ship Ignored Offer Of Aid, Says Captain-The Evening Star, Washington
- ALT1:... that the SS Lakeland was the first Lake freighter to be equipped with a triple expansion steam engine? Lakeland Shipwreck (Steam Screw)
Created/expanded by GreatLakesShips (talk). Self-nominated at 16:08, 22 March 2018 (UTC).
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- The quote in the "Final Voyage" section is far too long (cf. WP:LONGQUOTE). Either rephrase it or remove it.There are also a number of cases of close paraphrasing that need to be addressed. - Other problems:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - cited yes but reliability of [1] is not clear. You might want to look for contemporary newspaper or book sources instead. The Wikipedia Library offers access to databases such as Newspapers.com which contains a lot of old newspapers.
- Interesting:
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Overall: 
@GreatLakesShips: See comments above. Also,for the picture, [[:]] might actually be better (see on the right), combined with a hook that talks about the sinking. Please ping me if you have addressed those problems. Regards SoWhy 18:01, 6 April 2018 (UTC)
