Template:Did you know nominations/Rolling Green Run
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by sstflyer 08:41, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
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Rolling Green Run
[edit]- ... that a golf course probably contributes to the impairment of Rolling Green Run?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/David J. Foulis
- Comment: It somehow seemed perfect, especially given the stream's name.
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self-nominated at 02:01, 1 September 2015 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook fact has an inline citation, the article is neutral and does not contravene policy issues. Not a DYK issue, but this sentence needs attention to explain what the distance refers to - "Rolling Green Run joins the Susquehanna River 121.78 miles (195.99 km)." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
- I'd imagined that it would be apparent that it's upriver of the Susquehanna River's mouth, since a) Rolling Green Run is not 121 miles long and b) the place where a creek joins a river is the creek's mouth, not a point upstream of it. I also tweaked the hook from plural to singular since there appears to be only one golf course in the watershed. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 18:34, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
