Template:Did you know nominations/Roba Ranch

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:27, 3 September 2013 (UTC)

Roba Ranch

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... that in 1899, the Roba Ranch in Central Oregon had one of its sheep camps burned, the result of a range war between cattlemen and sheepherders?

Reviewed: Crack climbing
Comment: Hook source is in Reference 2 (see National Register of Historic Places Registration Form, Section 8, middle of p. 5)

Created/expanded by Orygun (talk). Self nominated at 04:55, 25 August 2013 (UTC).

Article is new, long enough, and well-composed. No copyvio detected. Hook is under 200 characters and interesting enough. Hook fact is verified from online sources. However, the final section ("Location") reads like instructions on how to drive there. This should be written in more encyclopedic tone before appearing on the main page. Sasata (talk) 03:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

Have deleted last 5 sentences from "Location" section. This was text that provided detailed info on how to get to the ranch. Believe this should resolve concerns.--Orygun (talk) 23:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

Article now meets DYK criteria. Sasata (talk) 21:06, 1 September 2013 (UTC)