Template:Did you know nominations/Reserve Police Battalion 101
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:19, 24 July 2014 (UTC)
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Reserve Police Battalion 101
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- ... that the massacre in Józefów (monument commemorating the Jewish victims pictured) was committed by the men of Reserve Police Battalion 101, who were too old for the regular army?
- ALT1:... that the Reserve Police Battalion 101 became a major perpetrator of the Holocaust in occupied Poland only after the Wannsee Conference of 1942?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rape during the Sierra Leone Civil War.
Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self nominated at 16:26, 29 June 2014 (UTC).
- New enough and long enough; image is on Commons so good there. However, for both hooks they are not quite supported by footnotes. As in, the sentences that contain the information have to have an inline cite at the end of the sentence, not just the paragraph or surrounding sentences. Also, the main hook should probably read "...was committed by the men of Reserve Police Battalion 101, who were too old for the regular army?" Aboutmovies (talk) 06:23, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
Done Thanks for the QPQ, Aboutmovies, much appreciated. The anchors for the inline citations have been improved and placed right at the end of sentences used in the hooks. Also, please note, the first hook (above) has been reworded for improved grammar exactly how you proposed. Would you please indicate which hook is your first choice in order to speed up the process? – Looking forward to your go-ahead. Thanks a million, Poeticbent talk 15:19, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
for alt hook as preview does not cover fact; 
for main hook. Spot check for plagiarism only shows the command structure as a possible issue, but I don't think there is another way to really present that information which is not really prose. My preference is the ALT hook, as the main one is a bit too trivial given the topic. Aboutmovies (talk) 14:42, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
