Template:Did you know nominations/Raymond House (Vassar College)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 18:18, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Raymond House (Vassar College)

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... that Raymond House (pictured) was the first residence hall at Vassar College to offer a cooperative living plan?
- ALT1: ... that Vassar College students living in Raymond House (pictured) were able to receive $115 off their annual bills in exchange for housekeeping duties?

Reviewed: new user

Created by Misaugstad (talk). Self nominated at 22:23, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

solid article, but just long enough, and not long enough if I consider that the lead repeats a lot from the body. Can you expand a bit? The hook doesn't interest me too much, but that is only the next question. I accept the offline source AGF, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:26, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Expanded article about 200 characters, added several sources, added alt hook. Hope this helps! BobAmnertiopsis ∴_ChatMe! 17:44, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

yes, thank you. I like the ALT better than the original, but suggest to drop "once". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:13, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

Done! BobAmnertiopsis ∴_ChatMe! 23:04, 25 April 2014 (UTC)