Template:Did you know nominations/Ramsen (card game)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 08:43, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
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Ramsen
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The permanent trumps in Ramsen
... that Ramsen is a traditional Austrian and Bavarian card game that has four permanent trumps – the 7 of Bells, 9 of Bells, Ober of Acorns and Unter of Acorns – ranking just below the trump Sow?Source: "Trümpfe: Reihenfolge: Trumpf-Sau, Schell-9er (Dallmutz), Schell-7er (Belli), Eichel-Ober (großer Bube), Eichel-Unter (kleiner Bube)…" Sirch, Walter (2008). Vom Alten zum Zwanzger - Bayerische Kartenspiele für Kinder und Erwachsene - neu entdeckt. Bayerischer Trachtenverband, pp. 59/60.
- Reviewed: Wilhelm Kempf (bishop)
Created by Bermicourt (talk). Self-nominated at 16:55, 12 October 2018 (UTC).
Another decent card game article, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The hook, and to some extent the article, have many terms that are Chinese for people unfamiliar with Bavarian card games. How about stopping the hook after "trumps"? - Suggestions for the article: please define Sich as a ref for harv citation. (I get all these ugly error messages.) Ref 3 is missing a title. You don't need a reference in the lead, as long as facts are referenced in the body. Explain "schlecken / geschleckt" to someone who doesn't know German. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:51, 22 October 2018 (UTC)- @Gerda Arendt: Thanks that's helpful. I have:
- changed the reference template for Sirch from Template:sfn to <ref>
- removed the references from the lede, but added cited text in the main body that covers what is said
- adjusted ref 3 to include the name and title in the link itself
- clarified the meaning of schlecken when it first occurs in the text.
- come up with the alternative hook below.
- ALT1: ... that Ramsen is a traditional Austrian and Bavarian card game with the unusual feature of four permanent trump cards (pictured) ranking just below the trump Sow?
- Bermicourt (talk) 10:34, 26 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Hi, is there anything else you'd like me to address. :) Bermicourt (talk) 13:15, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- No, sorry, I just forgot, was on vacation. I modified the Hook: added pictured, delinked current countries, dropped the bracketed Ace; - Sow is strong, and there's a link.
The image is a licensed and almost needed ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:47, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Hi, is there anything else you'd like me to address. :) Bermicourt (talk) 13:15, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
