Template:Did you know nominations/Ralph Deleon

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:22, 10 January 2017 (UTC)

Ralph Deleon

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• ... that Ralph Deleon was part of the Ontario High School homecoming court before attending California State University, San Bernardino? Source: [1] & [2]
  • ALT1:... that Ralph Deleon was only convicted of three of five charges against him? Source: [3]
  • ALT2:... that President-elect Donald Trump was referring to the case involving Ralph Deleon in a speech about immigration? Source: [4]
  • ALT3:... that one of the attackers of the 2015 San Bernardino attack stopped planning an earlier attack after the arrest of Ralph Deleon? Source: [5]
  • ALT4:... that Ralph Deleon dropped out of college and sold his car to fund his trip to Afghanistan? Source: [6]

• Reviewed: José Antonio Raón y Gutiérrez
• Comment: Article was worked on in user space, and was made live on 17 November. Article has 3,818 characters of prose (without spaces) by my count. The reliable sources used in the article and used to verify the hooks are provided, and all are shorter than 200 characters in length (including spaces). Nearly every sentence is cited to a non-primary reliable source. I have also met QPQ here.

Created by RightCowLeftCoast (talk). Self-nominated at 22:07, 17 November 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough as of date of nomination and is long enough. No image. QPQ met.

• Hook is well sourced, reference to homecoming court is found in inline citation.
• ALT 1 is well sourced.
• ALT 2 is well sourced but I would propose it to read: ... that President-elect Donald Trump referred to the Ralph Deleon case in a speech about immigration? Source: [7]
• ALT 3 and 4 well sourced.
• Good to go with either of the above options. Liam E. Bekker (talk) 09:28, 10 January 2017 (UTC)