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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 10:28, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

Radioplane OQ-17

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Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self-nominated at 09:35, 8 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Hi The Bushranger, review follows: Article created 7 December; article is just over minimum length (I discounted the lists and stats sections); article is well written and sourced throughout to reliable sources; hook is interesting and cited in the article correctly; QPQ has been done. One query I have is that I think the hook might be improved by providing a date for context. Would "...the 1946 Radioplane..." world or perhaps "late 1940s" or similar? - Dumelow (talk) 11:34, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
On reflection I changed to "mid 1940s" as the article supporting the hook is dated 1947. Good to go - Dumelow (talk) 12:07, 9 December 2017 (UTC)