Template:Did you know nominations/Privy Garden of the Palace of Whitehall

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:41, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Privy Garden of the Palace of Whitehall

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... that the Privy Garden of the Palace of Whitehall, painted by Canaletto in 1747 (pictured), had a screen installed to ensure that passers-by would not see the English king naked in his bathtub?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ladislaus III of Hungary

Created by Prioryman (talk). Self nominated at 22:42, 25 January 2015 (UTC).

This article is indeed new enough, long enough, and cites sources with adequate inline citations. This hook works well and is an appropriate length for DYK, just under the wire. A QPQ review has also been completed. -- Caponer (talk) 23:46, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

I think the following is a little smoother:
ALT1: ... that the Privy Garden of the Palace of Whitehall (pictured in a 1747 painting by Canaletto) had a screen installed to ensure that passers-by would not see the English king naked in his bathtub?
No further review required for the ALT – it just rewords the (pictured) part. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 11:22, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Fine by me; I agree that it's better and the hook is still an appropriate length. Thanks, Mandarax. Prioryman (talk) 11:27, 31 January 2015 (UTC)