Template:Did you know nominations/PlayStation Vita Pets

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:50, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

PlayStation Vita Pets

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• ... that dogs will speak with the player and plead to adventure with them in PlayStation Vita Pets?

• Reviewed: Bridgeport Harbor Light

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nominated at 03:55, 8 August 2014 (UTC).

• Generally good; the hook checks out, but I wonder if you can't make it a little more engaging. Could probably go as is though. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 13:09, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

• Hmmm.... I really want a hook that gets across how weird the vibe is to have speaking dogs but I just can't seem to phrase it right. I think the one I have up there will do just fine but I'll think on it and look into alt hooks. Nomader (talk) 00:51, 9 August 2014 (UTC)