Template:Did you know nominations/Paustian House
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The result was: promoted by Redtigerxyz Talk 09:09, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
Paustian House
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- ... that the Paustian House (pictured) in Copenhagen, designed by Jørn Utzon was later expanded by his son Kim Utzon?
Created/expanded by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Elekhh (talk) at 20:10, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
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Needs new hook, preferably one about the inspiration for the design, which is properly cited.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:27, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
- Regarding the original hook I don't see where the issue is, since that is what the article and source state ("Utzon's son Kim, who helped with the original plans, went on to expand the complex with two new buildings housing a restaurant and a yacht club as well as extensions to the showrooms"). Nevertheless, I am happy to provide alternative hook (with Alt image). --Elekhh (talk) 20:59, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
Much more interesting, IMO.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:02, 23 September 2011 (UTC)
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- Alt ... that the inspiration for the Paustian House (pictured) in Copenhagen came to architect Jørn Utzon while he was walking through a forest of beech trees?