Template:Did you know nominations/Oriana Skylar Mastro 2

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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 13:51, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

Oriana Skylar Mastro

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US political scientist and Air Force officer Oriana S. Mastro in uniform

... that political scientist Oriana Skylar Mastro enlisted in the US military in 2004 following advice from deputy commander of then U.S. Pacific Command, despite having planned to pursue an academic career? Source: https://news.stanford.edu/2021/11/11/combining-military-service-scholarship/
- Reviewed: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Joseph_Petzoldt

Improved to Good Article status W9793 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:54, 23 June 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Oriana Skylar Mastro 2; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting: - n

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Article was nominated within 7 days of reaching Good Article status. Article is more than 1,500 words long in prose. No problems with sourcing and plagiarism. Earwig picked up an "unlikely" copyright violation of 28.1%. QPQ still needs to be done. I don't feel like the hook is interesting as being advised to take a different career is pretty common; is there any way to rephrase that or find a different hook? lullabying (talk) 07:18, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing. Would one of the following be better?

DYK... American political scientist and China specialist Oriana Skylar Mastro was inspired to write her first book after participating in a military war game simulation? (source: https://news.stanford.edu/stories/2021/11/combining-military-service-scholarship)

DYK... Oriana Skylar Mastro, a Stanford political scientist, joined the U.S. Air Force as a PhD student to better understand military issues in the Asia Pacific? (source: https://news.stanford.edu/stories/2021/11/combining-military-service-scholarship)

W9793 (talk) 23:53, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

I like "ALT2: ... that Oriana Skylar Mastro, a Stanford political scientist, joined the U.S. Air Force as a PhD student to better understand military issues in the Asia Pacific? (source: https://news.stanford.edu/stories/2021/11/combining-military-service-scholarship)." All that's left to do is your QPQ and I think you're good to go. lullabying (talk) 00:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

I've completed a review here - https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Joseph_Petzoldt W9793 (talk) 04:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Can you put the link to the QPQ on the "Reviewed" parameter in your initial submission? lullabying (talk) 04:40, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
  - Good to go. Thanks! lullabying (talk) 02:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC)