Template:Did you know nominations/Nesta Wells

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:36, 11 January 2020 (UTC)

Nesta Wells

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~~... that Nesta Wells was the first British female police surgeon?~~ Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
- ALT1:... that Nesta Wells, the first British woman police surgeon, published a survey in the British Medical Journal of the 1,959 suspected sexual offence cases to which she had been referred? Source: The BMJ article, the pg 1404-1405 and D'Cruze book reference

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Earl Landgrebe
Comment: I welcome hook suggestions

Created by Cowlibob (talk). Self-nominated at 14:27, 18 December 2019 (UTC).

Hi Cowlibob, review follows: article created 18 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't notice any overly close paraphrasing from the sources; hook is interested, mentioned in the article and backed up by the ODNB source. Once a QPQ is provided this one should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 15:57, 18 December 2019 (UTC)

@Dumelow: Thanks for your review, I've added a QPQ above. Cowlibob (talk) 16:25, 18 December 2019 (UTC)

All good - Dumelow (talk) 17:05, 18 December 2019 (UTC)

@Cowlibob: Hi, could you suggest something other than a "first woman" hook? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 01:09, 3 January 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: Certainly, I'll work something up and let you know.Cowlibob (talk) 10:38, 3 January 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: ALT1 above, feel free to suggest amendments. The table shows 1,959 (after discounting crossover), the book reference has seemingly rounded this to 2000. Cowlibob (talk) 11:45, 3 January 2020 (UTC)

Excellent, thanks! ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I tweaked the grammar in the hook and article, and moved the subject to the front of the hook. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:16, 3 January 2020 (UTC)