Template:Did you know nominations/Nana Nuriana

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 17:17, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Nana Nuriana

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... that before joining the Indonesian Military Academy, Nana Nuriana studied geology? Source: Ensiklopedi Sunda: alam, manusia, dan budaya, termasuk budaya Cirebon dan Betawi, p444
- ALT1: ... that when West Java governor Nana Nuriana ran for reelection in 1998, he faced fifteen competitors? Source: Politik Mantan Serdadu: Purnawirawan dalam Politik Indonesia, 1998–2014, p220
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Macromia alleghaniensis
- Comment: -

Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 07:32, 31 December 2022 (UTC).

I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:05, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Pretty much meets the requirements, but I see one issue: the ALT1 hook states that when West Java governor Nana Nuriana ran for reelection in 1998, he faced sixteen competitors while I read in the article his candidacy was challenged with seventeen gubernatorial candidates running for the office – was it sixteen or seventeen? Also, I'll AGF on the sources, both of which I am unable to read. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:16, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Seventeen participants including himself, or sixteen competititors against him. Juxlos (talk) 01:48, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

I see. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Another editor brought up something regarding ALT1, so I decided to cross it out just to be safe. Juxlos (talk) 13:54, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

@Juxlos and BeanieFan11: Might be just an opinion, but I am not seeing what is interesting about the hook. Bruxton (talk) 18:34, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

@Bruxton: maybe ALT2: ... that Banten seceded from West Java despite the latter's governor Nana Nuriana's opposition? Juxlos (talk) 05:21, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Needs a more interesting hook I think. ALT2 is clumsy IMO. Bruxton (talk) 16:32, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

What was the issue with ALT1? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:05, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

@BeanieFan11: Well, not much exactly. Another user pointed out it was 16 total not 16+1. Unstruck. Also @Bruxton:. Juxlos (talk) 16:28, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

I will promote ALT1 Bruxton (talk) 17:16, 23 January 2023 (UTC)