Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Leigh Leigh

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 08:32, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Murder of Leigh Leigh

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~~... that the murder of 14-year-old schoolgirl Leigh Leigh (headstone pictured) inspired a theatrical play that was later adapted into a feature film?~~

Reviewed: The Girl With All The Gifts

Improved to Good Article status by Freikorp (talk). Self nominated at 02:39, 8 August 2014 (UTC).

- No problems that I could find. promoted to GA on august 8th, long enough, inline citations, neutral, hook cited and interesting. Personally, I think a hook that focus on the victim blaming would be more interesting to the reader (I mean, who in their right mind blames a murder victim for their own murder?), but there are no major issues as is. Bali88 (talk) 18:44, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Bali88, plenty of people blame the victim in all sorts of crimes; I think such a hook would be offensive, not interesting. Did you check all the sources for close paraphrasing? Yoninah (talk) 22:32, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

Many sources were offline, but the ones that were online, yes. Bali88 (talk) 22:44, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

Here is another hook idea:
ALT1: ... that no one really knows who killed Leigh Leigh? Yoninah (talk) 00:26, 15 August 2014 (UTC)

Sounds good to me, I'd be happy with either hook :) Freikorp (talk) 02:05, 15 August 2014 (UTC)

Reviewer needed to decide on the hook. Yoninah (talk) 09:19, 15 August 2014 (UTC)

Close call, but I say the second one. Bali88 (talk) 12:39, 15 August 2014 (UTC)