Template:Did you know nominations/Moses Moreno

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:40, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

Moses Moreno

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... that Moses Moreno finished his college career as Colorado State's leader in touchdown passes?

ALT1:... that Moses Moreno was named the WAC Offensive Player of the Year in 1997?
ALT2:... that Moses Moreno's brother Zeke Moreno was drafted by Moses' team in 2001?
Reviewed: Off to the Races (song)
Comment: Originally unsourced BLP; expanded twofold on December 10

Created/expanded by Phbasketball6 (talk). Nominated by ZappaOMati (talk) at 04:47, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

Well-referenced and informative. It passes 1,500-character minimum, passes twofold requirement as BLP, and passes fivefold as former stub. All hooks are all right, but ALT2 is... well, you can rework Zeke Moreno article if you can and then include it in this nomination. Otherwise, I want more exciting hooks, like injury that ended his career and/or current status (assistant high school coach). ~~If not, then... I'm torn between all three you have.~~ --George Ho (talk) 07:03, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do after I get back from school. Zappa O Mati 14:45, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

Here's another hook I created:

ALT3:... that Moses Moreno filed a grievance against the San Diego Chargers for releasing him while he was injured? Zappa O Mati 22:31, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

ALT3 I prefer. Copyediting may be need, but I hope that's minor. --George Ho (talk) 22:38, 13 December 2012 (UTC)