Template:Did you know nominations/Michigan Stove Company

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 14:55, 28 January 2020 (UTC)

Michigan Stove Company, Jeremiah Dwyer, World's Largest Stove, George Harrison Barbour, William J. Keep

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World's Largest Stove

... that the Michigan Stove Company, started by Jeremiah Dwyer, made the World's Largest Stove (pictured) weighing 15-tons that was conceived by George Harrison Barbour and designed by William J. Keep?

Source 1 -...the Michigan Stove Company, founded by Jeremiah Dwyer in 1872, decided to build a "Mammoth Garland" stove...

Source 2 -...credits George Barbour...with the idea for the stove ...it stands 25 feet high, is 30 feet long 20 feet high, weighs 15 tons.

Source 3 - ...William J. Keep designed the huge stove...

Source 4 - ...Michigan Stove Company, the company responsible for building the "World's Largest Stove."

ALT1:... that the Michigan Stove Company, started by Jeremiah Dwyer, made the World's Largest Stove (pictured) that was conceived by George H. Barbour and designed by William J. Keep weighted 15-tons?

Sources same as above

ALT2:... that the Michigan Stove Company, started by Jeremiah Dwyer, made the World's Largest Stove (pictured) that was conceived by George H. Barbour and designed by William J. Keep weighting 15-ton?

Sources same as above

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Reinhold Fritz AND Template:Did you know nominations/Tuarii AND Template:Did you know nominations/Fred Evans (boxer) AND Template:Did you know nominations/Quarry Moor, Orobanche reticulata (2 articles)
Comment: 5 in 1 DYK nomination - 5 QPQs have been done

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 12:11, 7 January 2020 (UTC).

@Doug Coldwell: I'll review all five of these. Due to the number of nominations, I will not be using the reviewer template. Instead I will note each criteria for all of the articles.

All are new enough
All are long enough
All are sourced
All are neutral
No copyright violations found
No other problems, though you may want to look into adding some wikilinks.
All of the hooks need minor grammatical improvement. I suggest these:

ALT3:... that the Michigan Stove Company, started by Jeremiah Dwyer, made the World's Largest Stove (pictured), which weighed 15 tons and was conceived by George H. Barbour and designed by William J. Keep?
ALT4:... that the Michigan Stove Company, started by Jeremiah Dwyer, made the 15-ton World's Largest Stove (pictured), which was conceived by George H. Barbour and designed by William J. Keep?

Hook sourcing is fine.
QPQs have been done
Image is clear and free. However, it is only used on the World's Largest Stove article. @Doug Coldwell: I wonder if you can add this image to the other pages as well, just to be safe. epicgenius (talk) 20:52, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:10, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Just the question about the hook, and this will be good to go. epicgenius (talk) 20:19, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

@Epicgenius: Great improvements on ALT3 and ALT4 which I prefer. I would rather go with either one of these and scratch my original hook and ALT1 and ALT2 I submitted.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:37, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

@Doug Coldwell: Great! Then ALT3/ALT4 are good to go. epicgenius (talk) 20:39, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Comment to Promoter - Could this be put into the #1 slot position with the picture. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 22:51, 7 January 2020 (UTC)