Jump to content

Template:Did you know nominations/Mansoor al-Jamri

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:31, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Mansoor al-Jamri

[edit]

Mansoor al-Jamri in July 2011

5x expanded by Mohamed CJ (talk). Self nominated at 15:00, 16 June 2013 (UTC).

  • There should be a comma after "cleric", but I am more worried about mentioning his wife's "Western tastes". It might be a bit too ambiguous, especially since we are dealing with two living persons. Is it not possible to come up with a hook related to his career, a hook related to something he is notable for? I see no issues with the article itself - which is a significant achievement, as articles related to the Middle East tend to have POV issues. Surtsicna (talk) 18:12, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
The alternative hook is, without a doubt, better than the original one. If nothing else, it's hookier! As for the image, would you like to nominate it as well? Surtsicna (talk) 21:37, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
@Surtsicna: Yes for the image. You are very nice, thank you. Mohamed CJ (talk) 23:09, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
I've added it for you. You are welcome, of course. Best of luck with the nomination! Surtsicna (talk) 23:23, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
I apologize for forgetting the tick. Surtsicna (talk) 17:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)