Template:Did you know nominations/Madeleine Korbel Albright Institute for Global Affairs
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
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Madeleine Korbel Albright Institute for Global Affairs
... that first female United States Secretary of State Madeleine Albright (pictured) founded the Albright Institute to train women leaders to tackle global issues with an unconventional interdisciplinary approach?Source: Boston.com
- Comment: This is my second DYK nomination
Created by Brinacor (talk). Self-nominated at 06:17, 19 March 2020 (UTC).
- Hi Brinacor, here is my review. epicgenius (talk) 23:25, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- The "Notable People" section has no sources. - Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
- Other problems: - I suggest "unconventional interdisciplinary approach" in the lead, to make it clearer
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Overall: 
epicgenius (talk) 23:25, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you epicgenius for your review. I've added citations to the "Notable People" section (and in the process expanded the article a bit with more information about said notable people). I agree with your suggestion to change the phrase to "unconventional interdisciplinary approach" and will amend the proposed lead. Brinacor (talk) 04:42, 20 March 2020 (UTC)
- No problem Brinacor.
This looks good to go now. epicgenius (talk) 16:08, 20 March 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but with so much information packed into the hook, there's really no reason for a reader to click on the article. Perhaps you'd like to try something a little more "hooky"? Yoninah (talk) 21:18, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
It appears the nominator has not posted on Wikipedia since March 26. If another hook cannot be proposed, this will be marked for closure. Yoninah (talk) 18:53, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah, would something along these lines work?
- ALT1: ... that the formation of Wellesley College's Albright Institute was announced by former US Secretary of State Madeleine Albright (pictured) at her 50th Wellesley class reunion in 2009? —BlueMoonset (talk) 21:05, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you, BlueMoonset, that's very nice. I just reduced the overlinking on her title. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per epicgenius. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:12, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- No problem Brinacor.
