Template:Did you know nominations/Lucas van Foreest
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:54, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
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Lucas van Foreest
[edit]... that Dutch chess grandmaster Lucas van Foreest is the brother of 2016 Dutch Chess Champion Jorden van Foreest and great-great grandson of three-time Dutch Chess Champion Arnold van Foreest?Source: Derakhshani, Dorsa (4 January 2017). "Jorden van Foreest on his career so far". Chess24.
- Reviewed: Less than five DYK credits.
Created by Hrodvarsson (talk). Self-nominated at 23:02, 10 October 2018 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. Unable to check for close paraphrasing as most sources are foreign-language. Most of the references are pretty bare URLs; please format them using WP:Citation templates. Image is freely licensed. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
- The hook is okay, but I'm wondering if you would mind condensing some of the names for international readers who probably won't recognize them?
- ALT1: ... that 17-year-old Dutch chess grandmaster Lucas van Foreest has a brother, great-great grandfather, and great-great granduncle who are all Dutch Chess Champions? Yoninah (talk) 17:40, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Thanks for reviewing. I have filled out the references. The ALT hook is more interesting and succinct, I am fine with it. Hrodvarsson (talk) 23:55, 22 October 2018 (UTC)