Template:Did you know nominations/Love Story (Kyuhyun EP)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Schwede66 (talk) 02:25, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
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Love Story (Kyuhyun EP)
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that Super Junior's Kyuhyun created a whole music album and structured it like a novel?Source: https://www.koreatimes.co.kr/www/art/2022/05/732_322884.html- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Let's Go Karaoke!
Created by Moonchildkyu (talk). Self-nominated at 17:07, 6 June 2022 (UTC).
@Moonchildkyu As the AFC reviewer that accepted this article, I believe it is ready. However, the hook isn't imo.
- I think: ALT0a ... that Super Junior member Kyuhyun's EP Love Story is structured like a novel?
- would be better. Haiiya (talk) (contribs) 02:59, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Haiiya, the article needs to be reviewed based on the DYK criteria; see the reviewing guide for more information. Thanks! (keep an eye on tone issues) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 06:24, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
I had passed it according to the DYK criteria. Thanks for checking! Haiiya (talk) (contribs) 17:08, 11 June 2022 (UTC)- * Suggestion for @Haiiya: use the DYK checklist or enumerate the different criteria that matter in a nomination. Take a look at some of the reviews by experienced contributors to get a sense for what yours should include. (My DYK nominations tend to do this with the fewest words possible—that's what 500+ of them does to you!) Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:26, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
hmm, well, then it would seem that I simply disagree with your assessment, Haiiya. Several sentences contain unencyclopedic prose, and the sentence cited to genius.com is original research. I'm also concerned about the reliability of Soompi. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 19:06, 15 June 2022 (UTC)- Pinging Moonchildkyu as nominator to fix the issues. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 19:07, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
- theleekycauldron When I reviewed the article, I requested that User:moonchildkyu include additional sources next to the Soompi sources, so those sentences are fine. I see your point about original research, so I hope the creator will provide an alternate hook. I don't see any issues regarding encyclopedic tone, though. Haiiya (talk) (contribs) 19:42, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Final ping to User:Moonchildkyu, as it's been over 13 days since the ping and they haven't been active since June 9. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 10:00, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
Hi all, thank you for the comments. What am I supposed to edit exactly? Sorry, I'm still new to this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moonchildkyu (talk • contribs)
- @Moonchildkyu: The sentence cited to genius.com is original research and needs to be either re-cited or removed. In addition, the following sentences are unencyclopedic and need to be rewritten (underlines where it needs to be fixed):
He stated in the video uploaded via Twitter Media Studio that the track "Love Story" would conclude the series and aims to stimulate the emotions within a relationship during winter
For this project, Kyuhyun wanted the listener to experience the different moods of love and genres representing each season.
The EP opens with "Love Story". It is a ballad song about yearning for a lover though the relationship is already part of the past. The lyrics speak about reminiscing the memories of a past relationship, as if flipping through a novel. Each track has an epilogue, in which all six tracks string together a storyline, in line with the title of the EP Love Story.
- If the issues can't be fixed within a week, the nomination should most likely be closed. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 20:53, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
- Some of the issues were fixed on June 27 by someone else – but as it's been a week without movement to fix the remaining prose, this nomination should be closed now. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 12:08, 8 July 2022 (UTC)