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The result was: promoted by Redtigerxyz Talk 18:02, 22 April 2013 (UTC).

Lord Flea

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Created by Hillbillyholiday81 (talk). Self nominated at 20:50, 15 April 2013 (UTC), ably assisted by Ghmyrtle and Martinevans123.

  • This may be what I'd consider my first true "review" but, barring any uneducated misses, I'll stand by it; Hillbilly has made it easy...
New enough.
Long enough.
Policy... Neutral: yes. Sourcing: clean.
Hook... Length: under 200. Content: extremely hooky. Sourced.
QPQ... as noted as "Reviewed"
Review memo: I'd say it's good to go as-is but I'll suggest: mentioning WHY he's called "Flea" (it appears in source material)? and: the first lengthy quote of Flea's, maybe you wanna indent that into its own "quote" paragraph to separate it from the block of text its tucked into? and: there's a confusing set of [brackets] down in the body i don't really understand the usage? and: any way to successfully break up the lengthy "career" section (maybe segregating the "quote" suggested above will accomplish that)?
General kudos: this is an informative article about an interesting subject, reported nicely! Penwatchdog (talk) 06:04, 21 April 2013 (UTC)