Template:Did you know nominations/Life in Her Hands

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:10, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Life in Her Hands

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Kathleen Byron, who plays the role of a nurse

... that the British film Life in Her Hands (scene pictured) was produced to recruit women into nursing? produced specifically for the aim of recruiting women to nursing [1]
ALT1: ... that in Life in Her Hands (scene pictured) a young widow becomes a nurse to assuage her guilt after her husband is killed in a car crash in which she was the driver?

Reviewed: 1766 food riots

5x expanded by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 14:32, 22 November 2020 (UTC).

Reviewing
Article is well written and well supported by inline citations
Length - please clarify the 5x expansion (Expanded from 2,450 to 12,250 seems less than 5x)
Hooks are short enough, correctly formatted and supported by inline citations.
Copyvio issue on Earwig. Long verbatim sentence needs reworded
QPQ done
Image is PD and satisfactory res.
Clarify 5x expansion and address copyvio

Papamac (talk) 16:55, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing. I have reworded the sentence in question. @Philafrenzy:...please check expansion. I'll expand further if need. Whispyhistory (talk) 18:42, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

The expansion started on 15 November and it was nominated within seven days of then so the version you have to compare it with is the previous one of 12 May when it was only three sentences long (bulleted lists don't count). Philafrenzy (talk) 22:50, 27 November 2020 (UTC)

Thanks @Philafrenzy:, @Whispyhistory: . Understood. 12th May was 855 characters now 4,306 is 5x expansion

Good to go. Papamac (talk) 13:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)