Template:Did you know nominations/Lay Up Under Me

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The result was: rejected by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 16:58, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

Lay Up Under Me

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... that horns were included into Beyoncé Knowles' rerecording of Sean Garrett's "Lay Up Under Me" to change it from a slow jam to an uptempo Motown-esque number that recalls the tracks from late Michael Jackson's Off the Wall era.

Created/expanded by Jivesh boodhun (talk). Self nom at 17:56, 20 March 2012 (UTC)

The sources cited in footnotes 4,5 and 14 are not reliable. Several of the others are just online stores selling the album.--Carabinieri (talk) 14:04, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

... that Beyoncé Knowles' rerecording of Sean Garrett's "Lay Up Under Me" sounds like a Motown-esque number that recalls the tracks from late Michael Jackson's Off the Wall era.

Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:32, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

The point I'm making isn't that the hook is problematic, but that the article doesn't meet the standards.--Carabinieri (talk) 13:15, 8 April 2012 (UTC)