Template:Did you know nominations/Kirsty Martin

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 22:27, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Kirsty Martin

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... that Kirsty Martin was the Australian Ballet's first member to win the Prix Benois de la Danse?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Les fleurs dédaignées
Comment: for Women's History Month

Created by Ipigott (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 14:55, 24 March 2014 (UTC).

Article has 1672 characters of readable prose, so just long enough
New enough, hook is short enough and catchy, tone is neutral, running madman bot for copyvio at the moment, other checks appear to be copyvio-free
Hook is properly sourced, but I noticed that the Wilson article says she was the first Australian, period to win this award, though the Lalak source does say first for the company. So unless the Australian Ballet is the only ballet company in Australia or some other Australian won the award previously (?), perhaps clarification is in order with a minor hook rephrase for more "punch"?
Overall, hope article gets expanded a bit more prior to MP appearance, but if QPQ issue resolved and detail about hook clarified above, this one is close to passing.

ON HOLD pending completion of possible need for a QPQ, it's a bit fuzzy as nominator wasn't initial creator, but the nominator has clearly done the lion's share of edits - open to comments on which guideline applies here for the QPQ. Montanabw^(talk) 19:49, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

QPQ done. Article expanded. Offering ALT1: ... that Kirsty Martin was the first Australian to win the Prix Benois de la Danse? --Rosiestep (talk) 02:00, 25 March 2014 (UTC)

Approved with ALT1 hook. Nice work! Montanabw^(talk) 17:03, 25 March 2014 (UTC)