Template:Did you know nominations/Kae Miller

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 04:07, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

Kae Miller

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Miller, 1980s

... that conservationist Kae Miller's (pictured) support for people recovering from mental illnesses resulted in the establishment of Te Rae Kaihau Park in Wellington, New Zealand? Source: "...the proceeds were used to set up the Box Trust for Mental Health. In 1980 The Box Trust lent most of the money for the View Road Park Project and the View Road Park Society was incorporated marking the beginning of a new venture for Kae Miller and her like‐minded friends. The aim of the Society was to found parks and promote conservation and peace". "Te Raekaihau Park Restoration Plan" see p 28 confirms that the View Road Park is part of the Te Rae Kaihau Park. (also Wilson "The Box Trust for Mental Health is a major promotion behind the park…purpose to do something useful which is good for one’s mental health". There is a temporary link in the GA review where Wilson's article can be viewed.)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eva Siracká
- Comment: Would really like it to be in the special holding to represent Oceania for March 8, International Women's Day.

Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk), GRuban (talk), and Ipigott (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 16:00, 7 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kae Miller; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Starting review. Valereee (talk) 19:08, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Valereee (talk) 19:08, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

Trying to just bulletproof this...I'm wondering if the hook may overstate what the article says? What sentence(s) in the article are directly stating that her support for people recovering from mental illness resulted in the establishment of the park? Valereee (talk) 19:49, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for looking at it Valereee. IMO "In 1980, the Collaborative Housing Society reorganized as the View Road Park Society and began working on development of a park.[69] This organization lent money to develop the View Road South Headland Reserve, aiming to create a nature preserve, recreational green space, and sanctuary for recovery from mental illness".[59][35] (I need to flip the order of those refs.) I get that it's a wee bit confusing that when she was working on it, it was called the View Road Park/Reserve and now is the Te Rae Kaihau Park and Reserve, which is why I put the other ref above for the hook. If you don't concur, please ping me. I'm happy to discuss. SusunW (talk) 20:19, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

If you think it's clear enough, I'll leave it to the promoter and mover-to-queue to disagree. I'll move it to spec occ once it's been moved to approved page. Valereee (talk) 20:35, 9 February 2023 (UTC)