Template:Did you know nominations/Kaboom: The Suicide Bombing Game

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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:23, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

Kaboom: The Suicide Bombing Game

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... that the aim of the computer game Kaboom: The Suicide Bombing Game is to kill and injure as many men, women and children as possible?

Reviewed: Lucky Guy (play), Idiom dictionary, Dejanović noble family

Created by Freikorp (talk). Self nominated at 14:48, 27 May 2013 (UTC).

I've added one Citation tag for that paragraph on Newgrounds having removed the Arafat illustration. Also, the last sentence very closely resembles the Fox News source cited. I think it ought to be changed. Fix these two things and it ought to be GTG. Other criteria like length, neutrality, newness are fine and it's well written. Ashwin147 (talk) 18:44, 27 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I have rephrased the last sentence as requested. I knew very well when I was writing the sentences on self-censorship and lack of expansion that a secondary source for those facts would not exist; however, I hoped these edits would be accepted as self evident (eg. Fox News source mentions the games opens with an Arafat illustration whereas the official site clearly no longer features this.) Therefore the only way it is possible for me to address the citation tag without resorting to original research is to remove the sentences entirely, which I have done. I hope this article can now be passed. :) Freikorp (talk) 02:07, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Ready to go. Ashwin147 (talk) 10:44, 28 May 2013 (UTC)